I caught a ditto

One day I was walking through the fields with my turtwig when suddenly i heard a saw a flashes of light not that far away. I dashed towards to see what with turtwig besides me, untill when we got there, there was a massive explosion! I slowly got up and the smoke cleared to reveal two elekid's! One elekid looked very perculiar though.

Suddenly the purculiar one turned white! I thought it was evolving but it turned into a ditto! The elekid then used thunderbolt, but the ditto suddenly turned into a rock and the thunderbolt was blasted back and the elekid fainted. Then the ditto changed back and hid in the grass.

I diddn't go looking for it, i just walked away. On my walk I battled lots of pokemon but they all fainted before i could throw a pokeball. Then lots of starly flew out of the grass being chased by another starly trying to hit them with wing attack. The starly then saw me and turtwig and came down quickly with a powerful quick attack. "Dodge turtwig!" I shouted loudly. Turtwig dodged but the starly wasn't aiming for turtwig...

"Ahhhhhhhh!" I shouted as the starly came full power into my stomach. I stumbled to the gorund and laid on the floor badly injured. Then turtwig got angry and charged at starly with it's most powerful tackle. The starly flew into the air above and turtwig crashed into a tree. Turtwig got up again, only to be hit by a wing attack and turtwig was hit all the way and next to me.

Turtwig got up again, determined to win. This encouraged me to do it as well. "Lets beat this starly!" I said to turtwig. The starly came down hard with a quick attack. "Counter it with withdraw!" I commanded. Tutwig hid in it's shell and starly hit it at full power and bounced off to the gorund. "Now use tackle while still in your shell!" The shell started spinning, while getting faster untill it flew into the air and zoomed down at starly still spinning. It was a critical hit! Turtwig jumped back and stood up high in success. The starly turned back into a ditto and........

"Go pokeball!" I shouted. The ball zoomed into the sky, and a red beam blasted out and hit the ditto. The ditto was pulled into the ball and the ball hit the ground. 1........2....3 BING! Ditto was caught! i walked back home happy and turtwig was as well, but we both needed a long rest.

THE END

Length: Not that long, but long enough 2/3

Spelling: Few mistakes, but good 1/1

Punctuation: Capitals for pokemon names are needed, few other mistakes 1/3

Overall: Good story overall 2/3

6/10

Sorry, but Im following saltysee's old rule and I need a 7, close though!

spelling is /3 and punchuation is /1

I liked it. It should be judged by opinion lol

that means i should of got:

Length: Not that long, but long enough 2/3

Spelling: Few mistakes, but good 3/3

Punctuation: Capitals for pokemon names are needed, few other mistakes 0/1

Overall: Good story overall 2/3

7/10 i caught it

Ditto:
Level:10
Hp:39
Attacks: transform
Exp to next level:
Gender:♂
Type:normal

Ditto'sare awesome. Except when you don't know what they will be when they transform

thats why i wanted one