My pokemon story. I don't know what the pok'emon is called

**Caboose** Thu Apr 17, 2008 2:08 am

I had just gotten out of the pok'e center and walked inside a
cave to get back home when about three team rocket grunts had came to
me and yelled, "Hey this is our territory!! buzz off". I had gotten so
angry that i had just thrown my pok'e ball out with my Clefairy and
yelled to the team rocket grunts "Lets battle!!!!!". I had used my
Secret power on one of the team rocket grunts ekans!. It had fainted.

The
team rocket grunt suddenly threw out an Onix! I had kept my Clefairy in
battle and used strength, But it wasn't effective on the Onix so the
the Onix had used headbutt and had taken away 50 HP away from my
Clefairy. I tried to use pound to faint the Onix, but i had
missed. Onix had used headbutt once more and fainted my Clefairy. Its looks like its all up to Doduo. I had thought to myself. But he is only on level 15, what should i do? I had thrown out Doduo. Doduo use peck!, i yelled, but it was uneffective. It had only taken 15 HP points away from Onix. This time Onix used rock slide. Its was so effective on my weak
level 15 Doduo that he didn't evan hesitate on thinking that he would
lose. The two other rocket grunts standing behind the first one were
having
a little party for a celebration of their victory. The next day i had
been on a little adventure to look for some better pok'emon. I had
walked through all the deep grass and had a
standing behind me terrified. I had thrown one of my ultra balls at
him, but it had failed. I had taken out my healed Doduo and used peck.
It had taken just enough HP so i can catch him. I threw my last ultra
ball and waited a few seconds. I HAD CAPTURED HIM!. I was so happy. The
past couple days i had taken care of my
as if he was a baby. I had thought the next day of what i would do to
get back at the three team rocket grunts. I had decided to pack my
stuff up to see if i was allowed to get to the cave to get home without
having those mean rocket grunts coming up into my face again.
I had
walked in the cave and the three rocket grunts came up to me again and
said "I thought we had you running" I had givin them a smart remark and
they got angry so they wanted another battle to get me to leave again.

I had thrown out my
when one of the rocket grunts brought out there Onix. I used strength
Once and took out 80 HP points away from Onix. He had used headbutt,
but he missed. I used strength one more time and had fainted the Onix.
I made it through the cave and had made it to my house.

I was so happy!

THE END

**Leeeds** Thu Apr 17, 2008 9:14 am

You don't have venasaur

**Caboose** Thu Apr 17, 2008 2:36 pm

I know. i just put it in my story. do i have to have the pok'emon in my story

**Leeeds** Thu Apr 17, 2008 6:14 pm

Yes, so you have to use only clefairy in your story untill you get other ones

**Caboose** Fri Apr 18, 2008 1:11 am

*Edited* There ya go. I changed it and put only the pok'emon i have in it

Blobbybloop123 Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:22 pm

Length It was long enough 2/3

Spelling It was perfect! 3/3

Punchuation Couple of mistakes (e.g. i instead of I) 1/1

Overall rating It was very good! 1/3

Starly's dont know strength and you don't have a dodou

5/10 Sorry, but for me you need 7

ep to next level: 120
Gender:♂

**Caboose** Mon Apr 21, 2008 11:20 pm

o ok thats fine. Can you just lock this topic.

It will be too hard to edit it from where i am in pok'emon forum right now sooo

Blobbybloop123 Wed Apr 30, 2008 9:48 am

Power word lockety

**Leeeds** Sat May 03, 2008 9:34 am

halo wants to edit it so unlockety

**Caboose** Sat May 03, 2008 7:17 pm

Oh k thanks. I hope i'm not a bother. I'm going to lock it again because there is almost no way i can edit it.

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